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Love

LOVE
Love sometimes hurts
Like when you man flirts.
Sometimes they lie
And that makesyou cry.
When you are down
Your man is always around.
Love is the best
It's like finding a treasure Chest.



By: Jacklyn
    Leighann
     Smith

Author notes

boys suck so dose love blah!!!
Written December 19th, 2005

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  • Trisha K.
    February 13, 2006
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    very true...very true!


  • bloodlustgirl
    December 24, 2005
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    vury nice write


  • Puppydog gold member
    December 20, 2005
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    A VERY LOVELY POEM

    Ah, the ups and downs of loving someone. I think everyone has had these same feelings as they give themselves to someone.