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Love

Loving someone,
And being in love
Are two separate things.
       Each player holds his/her cards,
       Each player has his/her moments.
But love?

Love, such a word,
Is nothing but a game amongst partners.
Love, a disaster word,
Only bringing forth pain.

Love, an embracing word,
Meant for truth and passion.
Love, a single word,
Exposing all of…
            Your mind,
                       Your body,
                                  Your heart,
                                              Your soul.

So use it wisely.

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Written December 19th, 2005

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  • kenny-streetcrazy
    December 23, 2005
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    WOW! I love your poem. It is romantic and desiring. The words you used to describe the meaning of love was amazing.
    Even though you and I have our disagreements, I still think you are a great poet.
    I also think that you percieved an excellent poem. A very groovy vista on how how romance feels, is it true? Is it not? I like that a lot.
    Well anyways, live on and live again. Cya later
    -Kenny


  • Clemintine
    December 19, 2005
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    thank you both so much, it actually started out as somthing completely diffrent, until i couldnt stop writting about love... and your comments about love Isallinthegame, are beautiful.
    Clem


  • Keith Drew gold member
    December 19, 2005
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    Beautiful

    Love is an hour seeming as a minute.
    Love is being in a city full of people, and only seeing one.
    Love is thinking more of someone then you do of yourself.
    Wonderful emotional write, I am in love with it !


  • XxXdArCyNiCoLeXxX
    December 19, 2005
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    Nice way of expressing your feelings torward love....I really like this poem!.....Keep up the goo work!*DarcyNicole*