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Higher Faiths

Mauve's hands rested over her swelling abdomen, thinking to herself, picturing their child. Two arms enveloped her waist, hands covering hers.

"How are you doing, Petite?" Diente whispered.

Mauve tilted her head back to kiss him. "Well enough."

Diente smiled, pulling her closer. "They all think I'll fuck up."

Mauve smiled and said, "You won't."

Author notes

Darling halfling owns the 'Higher' part of the title 'cause she inspired me.
Written December 19th, 2005

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  • crimsonshadow
    December 19, 2005
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    Muahahaha. The word Higher in this title belongs to me, ladies and gentlemen. ^.^

  • crimsonshadow
    December 19, 2005
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    'Higher Expectations'?

    Crappy, but all that I could think of. I like this storieee. FD is funnn.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    December 19, 2005
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    Them? I didn't know there was a them.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    December 19, 2005
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    I'm not even going to START suggesting. You know how trash my suggestions are. This is great though. At least Diente accepts them, which is wonderful. Yay!