I'm longing for something to come to me
Waiting for some special key
Let me open up a door to somewhere new
I'll go anywhere as long as it's with you
Singing songs inside my head
Laying awake on my bed
The day was fine
Yet it was not mine
Still going strong
But for how long?
Will I be beaten again
Keep asking myself when...
When will love find me here
I hope it is near...
Needing
Craving
Lusting
Passionate words fall from my lips
All but drowned out as my heart rips
Watching you go to him
Satisfying his every whim
Tears can never ever be shed
My body feels like it's made of lead
Each day is agony
Yet still I know we could never be
So here I am stuck again, writing
With my inner demons I am fighting
Trying to make a song to get through
Anything as long as it will reach you.
Author notes
Something that poped in my head while i was trying to sleep so I decided to get up and write it... I don't think it's my best but I really almost started tearing up as I wrote it out...
Written December 19th, 2005
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"So here I am stuck again, writing
With my inner demons I am fighting
Trying to make a song to get through
Anything as long as it will reach you."
I love this, I really do. It says something to me. The whole thing just... I dunno how to describe it. but GOOD JOB! well i just thought i'd comment and say hi. ok...
much loves
xoxo
bites and kisses
~tainted~
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Very Emotional... I really feel your pain... Keep writing it will serve you well... and I hate to sound like everyone else but you might try and show your poetry to the person it's about... It might make them change there tune... Great Write and Hang Tough
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amazing
Oh hun--I felt your heartbreak in this. You touched a nerve. We all have someone like this. Blessings to you for your endurance. Keep writing and healing. -
awww, that was soo touching. I have those moments when I wish the person i really want to talk to could hear me, and know how i'm feeling even though they aren't near.
Beautiful rhyming and flow, keep up the amazing work!
~Melle -
This is a great write. So sweet. I have to ask, is it about anyone special? I loved the rythem and the rhyme scheme it was very well done and the rhymes didnt seem forced at all. Awesome write! Reach for the stars bro, you'll go far!
Your sister,
Shanna -
Wow this really was touching and great! As always you manage to capture such emotion in your pieces... Hope you are doing well right now and remember I'm usually always around to talk to... Heh I wonder how many times I've actually reminded you of that... Well it is true and all I just hope to read more great poetry from you soon because you seem to not be writing all tat much! Love ya lots
and get back to me when you can! If I'm not around you can always e-mail me as well! OK I sound desperate now I'm going ot end this sorry Kit Kit! 
Angela
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hey, this is a really sweet poem but a bit up setting i lyked reading it tho. keep on writting you are a great poetic. cant wait to read ur other pieces. merry christmas happy new yr warmest wishes happy holidays. good luck with everything.
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