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...Unobtainable...

Sinking slowly into a never-ending abyss,

..Fade away into the night...

Unobtainable beauty,

Only to return with the morning light....

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Written December 18th, 2005

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  • Forms of Me
    April 1, 2006
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    Wow..the imagery here is sooo meaningful and powerful. I think you have done a great job with this.

    I am so sorry that I have not been reading in a long time. I remember you and I used to return favors alot. I come post and then mostly have to be on my way...because life is soooo hectic.

    God Bless you,
    LIZ


  • Deke
    December 20, 2005
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    I totally agree with this poem. You and your writes are great Katie. I really enjoy reading your poems.
    Deke

  • ali81592
    December 20, 2005
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    it was verry short, but really good, i like how you figured out how to make it short but meaningfull!!!