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Noel Prince of Peace /acrostic

Never forget our savior's name*
Or the reason why he came*
Eternal Prince of Peace proclaim*
Love one another in his holy name*

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Written December 18th, 2005

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  • Autumn Whisper
    May 21, 2006
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    Excellent poem suseann, short and to the point, well done, I liked it. You made it look nice as well with different fonts etc...whats the word...The presentation was excellent too.
    best wishes as always
    xElectricEyezx

  • Esperanza
    December 24, 2005
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    Excellent acrostic! I love the simplicity of this poem. I agree with the comment about the last line, but otherwise, it is great! Merry Christmas! Great write!


  • Abby100 Mann
    December 24, 2005
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    This is a beautiful piece of ACROSTIC that educates this reader on the meaning of NOEL.I really appreciate this beautiful write.Keep up the good work !Merry christmas!


  • suseann
    December 19, 2005
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    Blame that one on my catholic school I attended,"Holy Name".

  • montez gold member
    December 18, 2005
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    My Darling Chuck, this is a lovely littel acrostic.
    You are probably aware that I'm not fond of many poetic "forms", including this, but I applaud the message you send.
    Just one little comment - I think the last line would have more power, and would flow better, if it were simplified :- Love one another in His name.
    What do you think?
    R

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