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fix my heart

fix my heart
all the little
rips and tears
all the worn
from the past few years

all the pain
you put my through
mend the pieces
tell me the truth

i gave it to you
to love and take care of
you shattered the pieces
like a poor bloody dove

and so i lay torn
broken sad and alone
all because i didn't know
your heart was made of stone

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Written December 18th, 2005

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  • This Fragile Cliche
    December 28, 2005
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    wow.. i can TOTALLY agree... i love this poem... i could definately feel the emotion in this one... great job!


  • Mana MAYHEM
    December 19, 2005
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    Wow, This is a deep one..and its happened to the best of us. I love it. Manda

  • lil-miss-tash
    December 19, 2005
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    hey, his is a really good poem and meaning full too. keep on writting. have a good one merry christmas happy new yr and happy holidays. tash