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Faith (haiku)

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walk in faith not fear
words spoken in clarity
positive outlook

relinquish uncertainty
personify righteousness
never ending love

unyielding belief
irreproachable wisdom
heavenly reward

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Read "Tap On The Heart" by shewolfnative and I read your poem,"Wandering A Path Of Hope"
Written December 18th, 2005

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  • bookworm987
    December 23, 2005
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    This is amazing. Captures almost exactly what I think of about this quote. Great job and good luck.

  • pattyann4500 gold member
    December 22, 2005
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    These are lovely, Sandy! It's amazing that one feels so intensely their faith that they can write something so beautiful and make the reader believe so purely. Hugs, Patricia

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 19, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you for the wonderful comment. Always love when you comment. Love ya God Bless you.
  • ghost13
    December 19, 2005
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    This is an awesome hiku, You did a good Job on writing this. I'm glad I read it. I loved it. YEAHAH It's all about the faith. and you know that.

  • Sharcu silver member
    December 18, 2005
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    Wow... that's incredible. I looked at the contest and the quote and I would have never gotten this out of that. Your word choice is excellent and your three haikus make this a perfect entry into any contst. Very well done! Good luck in the contest.
    --Tim

  • jasminerose gold member
    December 18, 2005
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    Wonderfully written!!

    Wow Sandy, this is wonderful! I love how you write. I myself have never tried writng a haiku, but reading your work certainly inspires one to try. A wonderful entry for this contest...best of luck and well done!!!! Jasmine

  • jasminerose gold member
    December 18, 2005
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    Wonderfully written!!

    Wow Sandy, this is wonderful! I love how you write. I myself have never tried writng a haiku, but reading your work certainly inspires one to try. A wonderful entry for this contest...best of luck and well done!!!!
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