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God's Creation

Each time the raindrops fall upon the Earth,
And the Dew moistens the tender blades of grass,
Weaving a misty tapestry
In an intricate design....
I cannot help but watch in silent awe
And marvel at the beauty of the universe;

Each time the Rainbow crowns the sky
Like an iridecent diadem
When it casts a prism
As light touches the tin patches of air and water
I am spellbound
As I behold all of Nature;

How astonishing are the lawas of Nature!
How mysterious, how awe-inspiring!

I cannot help and stop and wonder
How moon,stars, and the planets all are held together
By an invisible band called, 'gravity'.
It is quite breath-taking
To watch the rising of the sun,
And th waning of the moon
All in its precise season;
Yet most mysterious of all
Is thted Hand that set Creation forth
Out of nothing what-so-ever!

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Written November 12th, 2001

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  • UKpoet
    November 12, 2001
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    Umm I think you need to re-read the requirements... not using the word I (you have 'I' four times), and should be in rhyme and meter!