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So Far Away

This time, This place
Misused, Mistakes
Too long, Too late
Who was I to make you wait
Just one chance
Just one breath
Just in case there's just one left
'Cause you know,
you know, you know


That I love you
I have loved you all along
And I miss you
Been far away for far too long
I keep dreaming you'll be with me
and you'll never go
Stop breathing if
I don't see you anymore

On my knees, I'll ask
Last chance for one last dance
'Cause with you, I'd withstand
All of hell to hold your hand
I'd give it all
I'd give for us
Give anything but I won't give up
'Cause you know,
you know, you know



So far away
Been far away for far too long
So far away
Been far away for far too long
But you know, you know, you know

I wanted
I wanted you to stay
'Cause I needed
I need to hear you say
That I love you
I have loved you all along
And I forgive you
For being away for far too long
So keep breathing
'Cause I'm not leaving you anymore
Believe it
Hold on to me and, never let me go

Keep breathing
Hold on to me and, never let me go
Hold on to me and, never let me go
Hold on to me and, never let me go

Author notes

Love...can it be explained?
Written December 18th, 2005

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  • WingedDemon
    December 20, 2005
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    wow, i like the way that this flows together. It would make a great love song, provided the right melodies. but i like it and keep up the good work.~~W.D.


  • Withered-Soul
    December 18, 2005
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    awww thank you so very muh and actually i have already made it a song...i play guitar and sing so i kinda made it like that...i should have put it under lyrics...lol...but yea...thank you so much..eh i try lol thank you...


  • Passionate Singe
    December 18, 2005
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    wow!

    i caught the rhythm in my head and this would be a beuatiful song one day. it needs no work, its perfect...wish i could write songs like this! Sheesh! do you have to write so beautifully?!