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I'm yours.

I can't help but smile when I see your beautiful face.
So full of hope, dreams, love.
With a solitary finger I start to trace,
Up and down and over the contours like a velvet glove.

Rapid eye movement when I'm wide awake,
Desperate yearning to take in all your features, feelings, spirit.
The glove falls away baring vulnerable flesh and I ache.
I ache for you with my entirety my darling, my all; this is it.

You are mine.
I'm yours.

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Written December 18th, 2005

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  • ----michael----
    December 18, 2005
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    that is beautiful.


  • eternalpoet
    December 18, 2005
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    3 Stars ***

    omg.. hey pandaeys there.. this is really such a romantic lovely write.. did you make your lover read this poem.. well then i must say that he is really lucky to have someone like you to write such nice poems for him

    take cares and have anice time my dear friend... just keep it up ..... your humble little friend..... ..... ..... .... - vic ( who else? )