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Blood

The taste of having it once again.
Has awakened me more than I have ever been before.
I never thought I'd get it again.
Now I have
and I'm great.
I'm more aware of my senses now.
I don't know what to do.
I can't sleep,
and being awake is going to kill me for tomorrow.
I can't do anything but be myself.
But that's hard when i haven't had it in so long.
The first taste has made me want more.
That's bad when I can't get it when I want.
I can go crazy from not having it.
And I know I will.
Blood just has more power over me,
than I have over myself.

Author notes

ummm...i know i'm weird but whatever...i don't care...i drink blood...i'm a vampire...it's been awhile since i've had blood and i got some tonight from my girlfriend...and i'm not going to get it on a regular bases like i should...so i'm going to end up going crazy...i'm sorry if this was not what you were expecting but this is part of me...if i have to deal with it then so do you...thanks for reading...and i know that the poem sucks...you don't have to comment...but these are my feelings...<3Anna
Written December 18th, 2005

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  • sophia heart
    October 9, 2006
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    I am not sure what to make of the notes you put there but the poem is amazing and so expressive, an interesting life. Truly exotic xxx sophia


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    January 29, 2006
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    short and well sweet isnt the word lol I don't think blood is sweet.... well constructed vampiretic thoughts a nice dark write


  • ej123
    December 19, 2005
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    rock on

    i didnt know you were a vampire... or a lesbeon..... rock on sister be who you are and dont worry about what others think i have always been interested in vampires so tell me are you into the religon of just have a thurst for blood. im me with the details


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 18, 2005
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    suck on vampire, i have no clue what i am but at least you do. this is a great poem with a rare form of bloodlust, lol. keep it flowing


  • starlite
    December 18, 2005
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    hey hunneh! i woke up this mornin and remembered u said ud have a new write posted so i thought id come check it out like i said i would! lol anyways nice write about u and ur vampireness lol..keep it up kiddo! love ya lots! take care and have a good day!! xoxox Jana <3

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