Welcome to Purgatory
May I take your name
You will be seated in a
moment
Oh, you see the after life
is one big waiting game
but do be assured we will
treat you all the same
like lifeless lumps of clay
Please mark your former
faith and sex
then get in line to see
who you'll be next
and no we do not take request
I'm here to do your interview to see if you have progressed
from cockroach to bipedal life yet
Ah so you were a saint
so lets try a crime lord next
Saint George at death
and Al Capon at birth
Don't worry you will have all of
eternity to figure out which works
best
Author notes
please tell me if it was to offensive, i guess this is my idea or a funnier take on my idea of what happens when you die reincation with a twist
Written December 17th, 2005
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- My Favorites--These are poem from some poets here at AllPoetry that I really liked. All poems are listed with author's permisssion • next in list
A contest entry
- what do you believe? by skyviewexpress.
350 points, ended August 14, 2006, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i liked how you intertwind the whole "waiting for a table" thing hehehe! i didnt find it offensive at all...maybe because I mock religion, but it was good! vwery nice...thank you for entering and good luck!
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damn good
Merry meet,
this is kick ass funny! I don't see how anyone could really be offended(they would have to try real hard). You should enter this in a contest and get your stuff out for people to read. I put this in my favorite file so I can send this to my girlfriend, she'll get a kick out of it.
Amethyst -
amazing
it was great i thought...
the ending really top'd it off... what a nice way to think..
i also liked the format.. the choppy rhymes... Great work -
great!!!!!
awesome! I love it it is characteristic of exactly what I've been talking about!
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