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your eyes...

When I look into your eyes
I see the man inside you.
They say they are the windows to the soul.
When I look into your eyes
I see the intensity and passion.
When I look into you eyes
I see everything your going to be.
And I want that everything to include me.

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Written March 9th, 2006

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  • dream catcher
    May 24, 2006
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    "When I look into you eyes"
    'you' should be 'your'
    "I see everything your going to be"
    'your' should be 'you're'
    Ahh love, I miss it, and I want to be in love again. I want this feeling you're talking about in this. Short and to the point. Good stuff