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Wintery Twilight's Soothing Power



Woodlands sleeps in blankets deep,
a hidden forest of secrets to keep.
Home of nature's splendid creations,
wintertime home of quiet white occupation.

I've stopped times partaking hidden beauty,
most times traveling in woodman's duties.
In summertime it's many trails familiar,
in wintry twilight I can scarcely remember.

Off in the distance the sound of a brook,
swallow and slow in frozen wintry nook.
Berries and brier scattered sparsely around,
covered fields of crisp forage to be found.

I love this peacefully forest in twilit hours,
in it's scenic revelry of nature's sweet powers.

                   ~~Suseann~~

 

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Written December 17th, 2005

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  • Sherry gold member
    December 17, 2005
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    This felt like the perfection of nature painted in words and viewed from the heart and soul of you lovely. Love, Sherry
    Edited on Dec 17, 9:38 p.m. because ''.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 17, 2005
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    Oh, so first you warm me up and now you cool me off again. Not nice Lady! LMAO J/K This is another extremely well penned piece, full of beauty. The sense of serenity from it, is truly worth the read! Awesome job here Blessings, Gypsy


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    December 17, 2005
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    Ok, so now how about go write me one with warm sunshine and pretty flowers. Beautiful poem suseann but I'm still mad at ole man winter Lovely work.

    ~Lyrical