You were always there when i needed you most
When I shed a tear, you would wipe it away
When I opened my eyes you would be standing there
showing me on my way
I loved you more than I did anyone
And I thought you were here to stay
But then one day you left me
You went somewhere I couldn't go
Chorus
and now every time i close my eyes
I can see you standin' there
The same way you were last time I saw you
And every time I start to cry
You are right by my side
saying it's ok
I remember the way you smiled
the way you lit up the whole room
They way you made me laugh
Like nobody else could
And I always wondered why?
why did it have to end this way!!!
Chorus x2
And now that your gone
And never comin' back
I can only imagine you
And see you in my dreams
But there is one thing
That I will always wonder
But I will never know.
why??
Author notes
This is dedicated to my ex boyfriend Alex. He was always there for me, but then one day last year he took his life... no one knows why... he was loved and adored by everyone, and we all miss him... one thing everyone remembers is his smile... I will always love him, and he will always be there, but I have learned to move on, no matter how hard...
~Karie~ 
Written December 17th, 2005
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wow. amazing write. i'm so sorry about your ex. it is very sad. the feeling of knowing someone who took their life is very powerfully sad. i'm so sorry for your lose, great poem. and good luck!
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This was an awesome write...I loved how it flowed and it was excellently writen...Hope to read more of your work soon
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that's so sad, and so beautiful, and I'm so sorry for your loss
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Shame to hear someone dear to you commited suicide, it's a pretty drastic measure, and I guess a lot of stuff was building up inside and he couldn't let it out. The poem shows you cared a lot for him, and how sometimes life can be shitty. At least you have nice memories of him and it was expressed sweetly here. Peace <3
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wow that is so informative!!not!!
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great write
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This was very well done, i could really feel what u were feeling.
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thnx babe
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hehe oops
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like u wouldnt believe
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awww mommy i like this song alot it made me cry a lil
i really really like it mommy good job and i hope you win!!!!!
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thank you for entering the contest, but remember: you have to put your results in your comments box, otherwise you are disqualified. thank you! sorry.
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thank you mommy!!
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great write my child. i love it.love your mommy
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