I can't stand myself.
I can't even recognize who i am
I have changed without wanting to.
With no warning,
i transformed to a monster
Destroying everything in sight.
My fickleness gets the best of me,
I feel weak
I am weak.
Constantly needing to prove myself
to no one but me
Killing life and beauty which surrounds
To keep my life going
Depressed and Angered simultaneously
Longing to cut and kill
Suicide and life on my mind
jumping in between the extremes
Contemplating how to make things right
Author notes
I really need help on developing this poem because i dont quite know how to get what im trying to say on paper.. please do leave and comments or suggestions on it. Thanks
Written December 17th, 2005
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wow this is every good. i can relate to your poem. i went througt a time where i felt like that. keep up the good writing. lter am am
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nice piece, brings out your emotions well.
to get your point across just simply describe what you are thinking, give your poem more life through raw feelings, raw emotions expressed through words. -
wow this is a very deep poem i like the feelling it brings to the table i havent read any of your other work but intend to do so soon so untill then this is my favorite poem by you good job
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I can really relate to this. I think it's very good like your others.
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