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you were not the guy i thought u were

We met as if was perfect
just you and me thinking we were meant to be
it started that way until i was proved wrong
showing that you were not the guy i thought you were and not everything is what it seems
well feeling so low for the way you treating me i spent time at the mall when i met a guy name Shawn who accident fall in love with
while i was with one man secretly i saw a other
in the beginning it bother me
such a rush as my my heart race
as the guy a dated in the beginning never changed
so as months go by i dated the other falling in more in love with each other
he knew i had a other lover but didn't care
so my heart i shared
the guy i was with didn't see me as a person
and i didn't see him for who he was as a person either
cause i was wrong too for cheated on him
to make me feel alright agian to have my thoughts clear i broke up with him and told i am in love with other man
i know i will never cheat again

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Written December 17th, 2005

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  • Shannon62875
    March 13, 2006
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    wow great write.. i am so againist cheating.. i have done it once, i got my ex back for cheating on me but i know 2 wrongs dont make a right so it was very wrong of me... so now cheating is off limits im not putting up with that shit anymore!!! this is a great job and i hope you learned your lesson!!!

  • fairyprincess22
    December 17, 2005
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    cute write

    This is a great write,
    It is verry cute.
    Heep up the good work.