I'll wrap my wings around you
through the longest, coldest nights
to keep you safe & warm...
I'll sigh softly in your heart
so you'll know I'm there...
I'll watch over you
when you feel all alone ~
when you feel the breeze lift your hair,
that will be me, flying low...
I'll listen for your tears
& dry them with my gossamer sleeve ~
don't worry ~ I'll never leave you...
When darkness grows too deep,
light a candle ~
it will be my breath
that makes the shadows dance...
Know that I am with you,
though you cannot see me ~
I'll be there to lead you
Home...
~ December 16, 2005
9:40 p.m.
Author notes
Prompt: "Prayers bring the healing powers of an Angel's touch."
Graphic artist unknown
Picture courtesy of Pisces Pieces
Written December 17th, 2005
A contest entry
- CONTEST : "WINGS OF COMPASSION IN TIMES OF GRIEF" by maa by maa.
2221 points, ended August 26, 2008, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - An Angel's Touch by Poetess12.
900 points, ended November 12, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Your poem is well written and touching.
The reassurance that "I'll never leave you"
is sweet. and "I'll be there to lead you Home..."
Thank you very much for your entry.
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This warms the heart.
I love to read angel pieces. I've read some good books about them, as well. I love the compassion that is so pure here. God bless you for writing such an elegant piece.
Don
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Oh wow...can feel the heavenly touch of one in the midst right beside me by your words. Excellent. Blessings.
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this verse has an aura of magic and sacredness ...
the gentleness of the whispering spirit voice is almost perceptible, almost tangible ... and I even feel that I have already heard those words, felt those feelings of time's suspension, of not-aloneness, of a silent invisible benevolent present without earthly contours ...
this is why I am confident that your words will touch my cousin very much, for he will also recognize this voice, this transparent touch of angel's wings, this soothing presence of all-one-ness ...
thank you so much for this precious poetic jewel, wanda
much love ...
maa
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This is really good I like it a lot.
Well done and good luck
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Well, I suppose this counts. I'm listening to the song right now :-D Great poem, I like the picture too. Great job and thanks for entering!
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Well done. I liked this poem alot. Good luck in the contest.
Luna♥
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It is angelic to see your wings
imagine love to love's design
and leave is feathers spent in freedom
the sign of wings to fly forever -
Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Jen...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... 
Wanda
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Thank you for hosting & for your kind words, Crazy Raven. If you read my 2 latest posts, you'll see I had a visit from at least one Tuesday...Be well, Poet. Wanda
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Thank you for hosting & for your kind words, Meggh Malignant. If you read my 2 latest posts, you'll see I had a visit from at least one Tuesday...Be well, Poet. Wanda
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I like it...
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Keep writing!
I don't think I've ever read a poem from the angel's point of view before so it's unique and interesting. I'll keep comments brief but yer, I loved it. -
Thank you for hosting & for your gracious words, WhispersFromWithin. I'm pleased you enjoyed it so much. I appreciate your kindness & your time. Be well, Poet. Wanda
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This is so beautiful! Probably one of the most touching and personal poems I have read yet. It truly brought a tear to my eye. Thank you very much for your entry and goodluck.
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Thank you for your kindness & your time, Michelle. Be well, Poet.
Wanda
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Well, you know I've already read this one, but I've read it again, and what I said in the comment of the last one holds true here also. You're speaking from the perspective of the angel and I think it's beautiful, the words are perfect.
Michele -
I'm sorry for your loss...& grateful for your gain...Love never dies, & a mother's love is something else entirely...She watches over you & smiles...she is proud of you & the lives you touch with your words, Poet...It really does make a difference...I'm pleased you got some measure of solace from this piece...May healing find you quickly...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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OHHHHHHH.. MY mother was an angel here on earth. She loved with a strength and gentleness that had no bounds. Thankyou so much for this lovely piece. God bless you. Love debby
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Thank you for your efforts in hosting & for your kind comments, Bonnie...I'm pleased you think it worthy of such a compassionately~themed contest...I lost my own mother in 1999; I understand Grief far too well, as you know...Hope all is well with you, dear Lady...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Serene, Peaceful, Promising
You have such a wonderful way of speaking peace and serenity, Wanda. I know Debby will be lifted up greatly by these exquisite woven words and encouraged to keep on going; just as her Mother would want her to do.
Love and hugs, B♥nnieQ
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Thank you for reading my poems so quickly & for your gracious words, Michele...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Yes, of course you may use it in your scrapbook; I'm quite honored...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Again, very beautiful, this is just the perfect description of an angel watching over someone. Your words flow effortlessly and display with such elegance. I sound like a broken record, but when something is beautiful, it just is. This says alot and I find it so comforting!
I do hope you will allow me to include your poem in the scrapbook I am compiling from this contest! Thank you so much for entering, I sincerely appreciate your help!
Michele -
Thank you, Brenda...I'm glad you liked it, my Friend...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Beautifully written..Willard would like this..It brings a sort of comfort to the heart..Good luck in the contest..Brenda
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I'm glad you both liked it...Our loved ones watch over us, even if we can't see them...we'll be together again one fine day... Wanda
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Oh wow, this is very beautiful. Thank you for entering. She really liked this one.
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Thank you, Viyanna langager...I'm glad you liked it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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ANGELS ARE TOO PRECIOUS AND SO IS THIS POEM
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Thank you for hosting a great contest, Shadows of the Soul...I'm glad you liked it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Wow!!!! Thats all i can say really! This piece is so beautiful and moving. The backround and picture are great. I was going to pick out my favorite part, but the whole thing is just so beautiful i would do injustice to the rest of it by singling one out. This is really amazing. Wow!!! Thanx for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck!
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Thank you for your kind words, grannyeri...I'm in a bit of a shock right now...I'm glad you liked it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Wonderful gold winner written here. Congratulations! Also on your silver winning poem. Double winners!
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Thanks for your lovely & compassionate comments, Tamara...I'm glad you liked it, my Friend...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Thanks for your kind words, Rhiannon...I'm glad you liked it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Thank you, Loud-Silences...
Don't know what else to say to all of that...I appreciate ya, Poet... 
Wanda
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Well, I do know where you found the emotion for this write. You and I both know. He will always be there for you and that you will never be alone. Your talent is leaps and bounds above the rest. This is just so full of everything good and true about you. This picture takes my breathe away. I wish you the best of luck in this contest... It should be yours, slam dunk!! An amazing write from an amazing person.
Always
Tamara
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Beautiful
So sweet. I love this. You are very talented I have to say. Again, I'm inspired by your words. I can feel each line you write. We must love our better halves the same way, I feel these words. It's exactly what I would say to him if I could only get it out.~Rhiannon -
BREATHTAKING
This is amazing. Powerful and so heartfelt. This poem grabbed me and just pulled me into utter peace and security.
"I'll listen for your tears
& dry them with my gossamer sleeve ~
don't worry ~ I'll never leave you..."
This stanza was more than words can say. I loved it. Your writing style was just fantastic. The way you used like "I'll sigh softly in your heart" and "it will be my breath
that makes the shadows dance..." AMAZING just absolutely a MASTERPEICE. Your talent truly shines above all in this peice. Please keep up the good work, I cannot wait to read more!
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Thank you very much, TopazBaby79...I'm pleased you liked it...Be well, Poet...
Wanda
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Thank you, Liz...I'm glad you liked it, my Friend...I appreciate ya, Lady... Wanda
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Thank you very much, sweetestsin08...I'm pleased you liked it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Thank you kindly, Edna...I'm glad you thought it was cool...& I am old~fashioned, Dearie...I still compose in longhand & calligraphy, too...My only wish is that is was at a rolltop desk... Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Thank you very much, grannyeri...I'm pleased you liked it...& I know you'll watch over them wisely & well...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Thanks, LadyU...I'm glad it soothed ya, my Friend... Wanda
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hey this was a really good poem. it was sweet and had good detail. i like the picture you picked and the background as well. they both added to the feeling of the poem. keep up the good work
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Beautiful piece, Wanda. Amazing description. The idea of a loved one being inside of you is incredible. Beautiful work as always, my friend.
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this is very good, you used great details, great job
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's alright, Sweetie...I know how busy Life can get...I'm just glad ya came by again...We got some snow today, too...it's bitter cold right now, but I think it'll turn to ice instead of snow...& now you feel safe??? Hell, if Mari was in my corner, I'd be brave enough to take on the world... Thanks for comin' by, Yem...don't be such a stranger...
Ohhh, you know what I mean...roflmao Wanda
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Mine, too, Sweetie...
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Cool and kinky
Love and kisses from Edna
17 December 2005
21.59 (am/pm is so old hat, so old-fashioned, dearie)
Chocolate box backgrounds are SO cool.
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I wish you were holding ME!! my grandparents all died.. -.- This was so soothing
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I always tell my grandchildren that when I die, I will be watching over them just like this. Well written. Sentiments expressed very nicely.
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a warm write that just wraps around the reader...like a security blanket or guardian angel. so soothing on raw nerves too
way to go
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Long time no read, I apologize for that. This is beautiful and we all want those wings protecting us...whether spiritual or metaphorical. I now feel surprisingly safe...hope it protects me from the icy rain and snow we're having.
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Poor puppy...I'm quite sure her daddy provided the utmost in proper comfort, too... Thanks, wattle... Lady Peach
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Yes Lady Peach, this was clearly written for Lady (our dog – www.jeh.org/b1/bath.html ) who had a hellish day today / a bath, then a thunder storm which sends her into all that you have described – ( )
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Thanks, doc...I'm glad you liked it, my Friend... Wanda
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Ooohhh...I see flattery runs in the family...I like that... Have a go at it, my niece...I'm not even sure what I'll be doin' tomorrow...I've been goin' through some changes lately...the past couple of months, especially...Thanks, Iohagh... Wanda
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Wanda,
This is a very nice piece. I love the way you describe the way guardian angels go about their task....
~Doc
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Wow, auntie. Do you mind if I mimic some of your poems too. I like your style. Ciao. Back to the grind at the bar.
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Yeah, 'cept I wouldn't be able to fly, then... & then I would be seen, too...
Thanks, my Friend... Wanda
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Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
If you had exchange wings for arms, this would be such a perfect erotic tale with just the right balance of sensuality.
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Thank you, crimsonfury...I'm glad you liked it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Thank you, Rae...but I am far too human to be considered angelic...even though my late Sweetheart accused me of it a few times... I appreciate ya, my Friend... Wanda
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This is beautiful...I want to say something else about it but words just don't come. Very well done on writing such a lovely piece.
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this is very spiritual in my opinion and yet its like another layer being peeled away to reveal the real wanda. keep it up
Rae
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