You who played the part of
The great honorable poet
So willing to teach and learn from me
Were just wearing a mask of truth
While behind it you laughed at my trust
Thinking yourself the clever lethal spider
Just waiting to bite again
You lied and plotted
Carrying the alias of someone else
Knowing that "she" would intrigue me
You've been a fool
You crossed the wrong warrior
I wish I had never stood up for your name
You sicken me
With your silver tongued words
That slither like vipers
Upon unsuspecting kind souls
Playing the charming victim
To others criticism
When you are the antagonist
Go and hide away in your shadows
Stay far from me
And those dear to me
For you lost the right to even
Utter a word to them long ago
I respected a man with two faces
The so called noble one
Poisonously sweet
You threw your venom at my name
Well now I fling it back at you
You spinner of lies
I renounce you
You manipulating bard of betrayal!
Author notes
You know who you are....
Written December 16th, 2005
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Dreamer, wow not only did this carry a very stark message to that person, what it was well and kept my attention through every single word. well done image and Visions. Ps Merry Christmas and GOd, bless you and your holiday season
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Wow, very, very strong piece with amazing imagery. I'm sorry that this was inspired by true events (or so I'm assuming by the messagein the author's note). I hope that you are able to heal quickly. Best wishes to you.
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hiddened snakes usally are forced into the light and punished for their crimes. this is a very great poem, i like how you show your emotions in an interesting way. i like how you did this, heal thy hand of false friends, wash there vemon from your eyes and see what they don't wish you to see, what they really are and who your true friends are.
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...what.... what is this...
Addition: o.o Oh okay. xx; Man, that made my heart race though... it's like a cold stare into your soul. Thankfully not mine though ^^;
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another awesome write
wow what can i say about this... there are many wolves in sheeps clothing. ones we let get close. ones we tell our insecurities.and then they have you.well young one. i say lean one the ones you know are true. hold your secrets close to you. keep near the mighty pulse of the light inside of you.. be strong. this person of with you speak will some day have alot to answer for. not just to you either. there seems to be a line waiting you get to him... now to the poem... your words brave as always. great imagery. hold your head up little one. you were betrayed but not defeated.. stand strong in knowing who decieved you. let it not happen again.like i said .. you know can move on knowing who did this. and heal. your friends are near. chin up wolf pup.
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I have no words to describe what I felt when I read this... I know you are hurting Caitlin by reading your words and my friend all I have got to say is I am here for you dear heart... always supporting you. Thank you warrior for posting this poem for I know many have been played the same way... including me. Thank you for sharing this work with me and for the wonderful gift of your pen. Blessed be, Nena.
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Hey, great job! It seems like a very fast peice, very dramatic and its definately very harsh. You havent lost your touch. Bravo.
-Tom.
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