you look down
in to the ground
you see a hole
and someone in it
you don't think who it is
you just walk away
and say
no one cares
they are better off in the hole
anyways!
but I think your wrong
I have been in a hole since I was 4
and all I did was try to bury it
but it never worked
and so now I'm stuck
in this hole which I don't know if anyone can help me out
oh how I wish someone could help me
but you see
ever since this hole has formed
I have become someone I hate
and despise
I don't want to be on this hole for ever
so I hope you think back and walk
to the hole
in which you didn't want to help this girl out of
and say OK I'm here
I'll help you
I just wish and hope someone would do that for me
but all I can do is hope
and prey
that some day I can forgive
the one person in which I love and care about
and even look like!
so next time you see someone in a hole
what do you do
have hope and think
hey if I was there they would help me
so now you see
all this life is hope
faith
and trust!
I hope I can escape this hole and try not to bury it any longer!
~Emily
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Written December 16th, 2005
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thanxz i try to think like this but it dodnt work lol
emily -
good poem, it's awesome, sometimes i just need to
think like this(actually alot) it might help.
anyways~your poem rocks, good job -
merry christmas to you too!! and happy new year!! thanxz im glad you liked it! yea i kinda figuered out that all life is hope,faith and trust! cuz with out it there would be no life jus all a fake! well love ya
~Emily -
great
wonderful write Emily...heres a
for you and a 
wonderful write again even though this was your first hope write twit was really great...and I hope to read another one that is under the catigory hope...well I will ttyl...
much love
Emily -
Wish upon a star...
"so now you see
all this life is hope
faith
and trust!
I hope I can escape this hole and try not to bury it any longer!"
So true my dear Emily, from your own words, that is all we can wish for.. and may all your dreams will come true, you have to climb every mountain and follow every stream until you find your dreams!
Love you my dear child, and Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you..
Always loving you,
your mommy ninja cat!
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thanxz yea i know!!!!
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I can hear and feel the cries from your heart throughout this poem. I know it is hard to believe this but everything will be fine. YOu must take the first few steps on your own, and before you know it you will be walking.. I kow it is always great when someone helps you up in times of utter dispare... It is also too easy to always rely on it...
You are a beautiful and smart girl, I know you can take one step at a time and before you know it.. You will be on your own walking, and even taking the time to help others in need... I will always be here if you need some help..
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