The Water of life eves and flows
The Water of life has many ripples
The Water of life could go one way or another
The Water of life could go on for ever or not
The Water of life will stop rippling eventually
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Written December 16th, 2005
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best by bezs hummingbird.
300 points, ended January 28, 2006, 45 entries
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loved it !
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awsome! spell awsome!
wow...eek! ur poems are kewlio and touching keep on writing! -
YO
THAT WAS DEEEEEEP IT BLEW OR SHOULD I SAY FLOODED ME AWAY -
This was good very different. I like how you are comparing life to water. It was kinda short though but it worked.
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Great
Amazing analogy and great use of repetion to compare life to water. It seems like the comparisons fit how our life is and it is compared with an incredible flow. Great work.
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