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I'm sorry

Andrew I'm sorry
nobody told me-but I should have
seen it myself. Why didn't you tell me?

You hid your sorrows so well
how would I have known something
was wrong? A smile always decorated your lips
how would I have known that you were really angry?

Did I miss the desperate signals?
did you ever try to tell me? was I ever to busy
to listen? did I fail as a friend? had I disappointed you?

how I could have been so blind!
and i said that I loved you
that I'd always be here whenever you needed me.

I lied. broke a promise. what I swore I would do-
who I'd be to you. I let you down.I let you down.
I stand at your grave wishing I was the one
who'd died instead of you. instead of you.

Andrew I'm sorry. Please know I am truly sorry.
Please stop torturing me. stop haunting my dreams.
if I had known...if I had known...I swear I didn't know
wouldn't purposely leave you to fight your battles on your own
when you couldn't stand, wounded, tired.

I'm sorry. so very sorry.
nobody told me...why didn't you tell me?


Author notes

something i was singing one day while cleaning my room...odd how some songs are born.
Written December 16th, 2005

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  • Trial and Error
    December 20, 2005
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    Though, you need to change the color. . I can't read it well
    Oh. . Jon. . wow. . so have so much to tell you.

  • Trial and Error
    December 20, 2005
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    Might just wanna tell you. . That is spam. . . And you'll get in trouble for it .
    Great write though Tia. Luff you!!!! <3<3<3
    </3Katty

  • CupidsMeth
    December 19, 2005
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    lol. thanks. same here.


  • Immortal Nightmare
    December 19, 2005
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    I feel everything your saying. its been fun chatting with ya

  • Pain-is-Me
    December 17, 2005
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    this is so sad, it was written extremely well. you put so much emotion into it makes me want to cry. this is a truly beautfil peice of work. im sorry for your loss.

  • shadowguy15
    December 17, 2005
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    Andrew I'm sorry
    nobody told me-but I should have
    seen it myself. Why didn't you tell me?

    You hid your sorrows so well
    how would I have known something
    was wrong? A smile always decorated your lips
    how would I have known that you were really angry?

    Did I miss the desperate signals?
    did you ever try to tell me? was I ever to busy
    to listen? did I fail as a friend? had I disappointed you?

    how I could have been so blind!
    and i said that I loved you
    that I'd always be here whenever you needed me.

    I lied. broke a promise. what I swore I would do-
    who I'd be to you. I let you down.I let you down.
    I stand at your grave wishing I was the one
    who'd died instead of you. instead of you.

    Andrew I'm sorry. Please know I am truly sorry.
    Please stop torturing me. stop haunting my dreams.
    if I had known...if I had known...I swear I didn't know
    wouldn't purposely leave you to fight your battles on your own
    when you couldn't stand, wounded, tired.

    I'm sorry. so very sorry.
    nobody told me...why didn't you tell me?

    I can tell you put alot of emotion in this piece

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