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In The Name

In the name of god
burn the lands
make it a Hearth
to warm our greedy ruler.

In the Name of humanity
enjoy the glass of blood
from the men you killed
Swim on the tears
of the people they loved.

In the name of Peace
fight in a worthless war
for a fake glory
for a dark future.

Author notes

It's funny what we hear about the reasons of wars, arab and Israel fight for Religion, America fights for peace, but all these fake reasons can't cover their stupid desires, the real victims of wars are the innocent people.
Written December 16th, 2005

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  • Ladybug
    December 23, 2006

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    you give the war justice for all the fake reasons behind it that slaughter all the saints that fight it.

    well stated
    Tamara


  • Chunkers
    December 18, 2005
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    awesome

    i like the repitition in the first line of each stanza, the poem was great great choice for the contest.
    Good luck