I bring you my inner thoughts, as I jot so openly
longing to share me, while penning emotionally.
How I daily dream and await to gaze into your eyes,
for there's no-one as beautiful, my song in yours resides.
When I see you dear, I'll caress your lovely, silken skin
embracing the grace that you posses, breathing it all in.
You mesmerize me with your tantalizing, sexy ways
as you mold me, you unfold me, and heal my yesterdays.
So take my kisses, I send to you, to make love come true
for every thought, without you near, I'm dreaming of you
I'm counting each moment, till I see your beautiful soul
remember this, my lover dear, I'll never let you go.
Love, forever and a day,
Timothy Weaver~
Adding your comment:
I think the rhyming (which you do very well and effortlessly...I envy you that talent) added to the romance of the letter. It kind of brings in all those cliches about reading poetry and candle light and such. The internal rhymes were also excellently done, and really added to the emotion. The only thing I can think to suggest is the very last part: "I'll never let you go." For some reason (and maybe I've been watching too many stalker movies lately or something), the way you said that almost sounded like a threat - like "you'll never get away from me." I don't know if you want to soften it to something like "I'd be a fool to let you go," but that kind of change would be up to you. It's just my lowly opinion. Anyways, great write and congrats on the trophy 
what a very soft and sweet write my bro 
Excellent write, Timothy. The sweet and passionate love that always comes out in your pennings. Your words, as always, leave me swooning... even though they're not for me. lol. You do have a way with words and hearts, Timothy... "Weaver of love" is your definition. 
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