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Just Keep on Smiling

She told me:
Just Keep on Smiling
and all that did
was tear me apart
from the inside,
knowing that once I did,
my happiness would be stolen,
leaving me in tears,
in anger,
in depression,
comforted and warmed
by only the memory.

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Written December 15th, 2005

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  • am am
    August 2, 2007

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    kinda sad but really cool. i love the way you write. keep up the good work. i like the way you write short sweet and to the point. keep it up. later am am


  • PassionOfAnAngel
    March 8, 2006
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    very deep..very emotional...so sad..but greatly written..great job!!! if you ever need to talk please dont hesitate to message me. I'll gladly talk to you.

  • medical mistake
    January 10, 2006
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    this is great...really deep
    keep it up