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Silent Memories of Winter




Rows and flows of silver strands,
drifting on chilled wintry winds.
Fall from the heavens in gray bands,
waves of snow pile high across glens.

 



Great tree limbs creek in frosted glaze, 
in  silent forest deep in glistening array. 
A wolf howls from a moonlit shadowed hill,
on silvery cliffs calling into the wilderness still.

 


Sounds carry far on crisp chilled winds, 
cascading waters from the river's bend.
Sudden sound of an axe striking a tree,
woodsman cutting firewood from fallen debris



 

Sends creatures running from hiding in brier's deep,
and awakens a Doe and her Fawn where they sleep.
Quite of winter in natures pastorial cold slumber,
awakens the senses in a multitude of wintery wonder.


~~~Suseann~~~

 

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Written December 15th, 2005

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    December 31, 2008

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    This moves the reader into drifts of glistening
    serenity. You seem to leave nothing out when
    painting a moment in nature's arms. Blue


    • suseann
      December 31, 2008
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      Reaching back on me uh? My meter is awhful,I see that. And did then too. But it said what I wanted it to. So... maybe one day I'll revisit and revise.


  • Sherry gold member
    December 17, 2005
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    Oh Suseann you write the most lovely winter poems you
    have a gift for them sweetie. How did I get so behind?
    Love and hugs, Me


  • Puppydog gold member
    December 17, 2005
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    TRULY BEAUTIFUL

    This is so beautiful dear friend. I have always wanted before I die to be able to be in the deep woods and hear a wolf howl in the night. All of the other wonderful things that you describe here give to me the sense of being there.


  • Red Rocket
    December 15, 2005
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    Good

    I almost felt the snow fall into my hand . Really superb explaination here, I am so glad to see that you are using your vocabulary. (It is so rare nowadays lol). I too enjoy the winter and its lonesome grandeur in the morning and in the late hours when the ice frost's onto the windows. Nature becomes so still and the animals are so delicate against the wintry background.

    Good work. May The Force Be With You

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