Alterations of the mind
contemporary methods
planning your life
around unknown emotions
Drugs running through your blood stream
tiny white pills
promising you sweet relief
if only the warning labels didn't exist
Alterations to your life
none of which benefit
just creating senseless banter
cant stop it, now can you?
Poison flows, seeping into your skin
settling in your emotions
finding another way to hurt you
now your THAT much closer to dead.
Deadly
Alterations
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i know its a p.o.s, but i just needed to type.
Written December 15th, 2005
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ok ... sounds a bit suicidal ... but its really good and very descriptive ...
I love you
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Thank you so much!
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realy good...excelling words and flow...gr8 structural corporattion..takes me into a new world...keep going..
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wow. awesome poem. I REALLY like this one. You really should submit this into somesorta contest or something..you would win! Well, keep it up! Im lookin forward to reading more of your pieces. -
i know how u feel, some of the things i write are like that. i really liked it though. very true, and well written. i really like it... alot...
how have you been? i havent talked to you in a while. hows life?
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Oh, thanks hun. Yea, every time i see you online, i have to go. lol. but yea, I think i will get fat and happy.lol. and um... monkey sex... lol! im up for it! lol. I love you so much.... gotta talk to u soon. Later
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omg! Wow! Girl this is your best work yet!!!! I've missed ya so much and I know I need to talk to you more often! I'm gonna go through all your poetry over the Christmas break! Yeah! You need to im me sometime! Anyhoes, the bell if fixing to ring and I probably need to go! I love ya always and I'll never forget about you! Have a Merry Christmas - get fat and happy and remember that without Christ there wouldn't be a Christmas! P.S. I want some more of that wild hot monkey sex we had last night! lol Catch ya on the flip side! Later!
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