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Chicago Calling 1AM



Hi, she says.
Guess what I'm wearing?
Tell me. I look at the clock.
It's 1AM.
High heels with straps around the ankles
fishnet stockings
a little black miniskirt
and a yellow tank top.

Where are you? I ask.
On the couch.
What are you doing?
Lying here on my back
with my skirt hiked up to my waist
and no panties on.
Are you alone?
Yes. And I'm horny as hell.

Touch yourself.
I already am. I have my fingers
in my pussy pretending
it's you. It's your fingers.
Spread your legs.
They're spread. Wide open.
Pretend my mouth is on your pussy
licking up and down your slit.
My tongue is flicking your clit.
Oh God, Cisco. I feel it.

Pretend I'm sucking your clit.
Oh shit, Cisco.
It feels so good.
My tongue is licking up your belly
toward your tits.
Oh God. Pull my nipple rings.
I'm pulling them
with my teeth. Feel it?
Yes!

Feel my cock, hard and hot
touching your pussy lips.
Oh yes! I feel it.
I'm going to push it in.
Yes! Fuck me with your cock.
My cock is in your pussy.
Deeper. Fuck me deeper.
Am I deep enough yet?
Oh God, yes!
Fuck me harder with your cock.

I'm fucking you hard. And deep.
Ohmygod, I feel it!
You want me to cum in your pussy?
Yes! Cum in my pussy.
Fill me up!
I'm gonna shoot my cum
all inside you.
Oh God! It feels so hot!

Cum with me.
Cum when I cum.
Yes! Yes! Tell me when.
Now!
Aaaaahhhh!
God, I'm cumming!
Cumming hard!
Oh! Oh! Oh!

Silence.
Exhale of breath.
Can you sleep now?
She whispers yes.
Yessssssss.
Dial tone.
I hang up.
The night is quiet.
I fall asleep again.

Author notes

Sometimes they wake me up at night. Hehehehe.....
Written December 15th, 2005

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  • SpinCycle
    October 26, 2007
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    hehe

  • Poetic-Artistry75
    April 6, 2006
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    sexy

    like that ... so that was u that called ? i love that it made me all hot and bothered


  • February 26, 2006
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    ata boy cisco...


  • Lorianne
    December 29, 2005
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    Makes me want a cigarette..and I don't even smoke. (How long have I been alone now?).. Good one, Cisco, I am gonna have to spring for a phone. Pay-phone at the 7-Eleven is just not the same.
    Edited on Dec 29 because ''.


  • Judas Denied
    December 28, 2005
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    MisInclined is right, you're very bad. But so goddamn good at it, that's the catch. Heh. I miss phone sex, sometimes I wish someone would call me so I could try it out again, see if I still got that something that made me so good at it. My voice is a mess nowadays, but maybe, just maybe I could coax it back to working order. Great piece as always.

    LIX
    Edited on Dec 28, 11:55 p.m. because 'Typo'.

  • MisInclined
    December 26, 2005
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    You are bad. So bad!

    Amy


  • Cisco Kid
    December 16, 2005
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    Yes you would. You have my private cellphone number. remember?
    Hehehehe...

    ~Cisco

  • zara
    December 16, 2005
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    103 reads, Cisco. You still da bomb!
    And from I read above, if you leaked your phone number, you'd never get any sleep. Mary Ann's right, you could make it a career; you missed your calling, Kid Man!

    Of course, then I'd never be able to get through to you.




  • ----michael----
    December 16, 2005
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    quit calling my mum. fuckhead. lol

    • SpinCycle
      October 26, 2007
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      i wish we could still applaud comments... nice one


  • Cisco Kid
    December 16, 2005
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    Best damn blow job I ever had was from an 80 year old lady from Venezuela. She took her teeth out and gummed me till I blew like a volcano, and her tits hung down to my ankles. I remember she had a tattoo on her ass of a map to Disneyland and another one on her bicep that said "Property of Hell's Angels." I've always wondered what happened to her. She was a hellova fuck too.

    Merry Christmas, Edna

    ~Cisco


  • Edna Sweetlove
    December 16, 2005
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    I have had quite a few phone calls like this recently. Unfortunately they are very expensive, costing £1.25 (US$2.25) per minute and they come from exploited 80 year old ladies in Venezuela. Classy though.


  • Angel Goddess
    December 16, 2005
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    Wow...so that's how you handle being apart from your significant other!! I'll have to try that sometime, lol. Very excellent visuals...I felt like I was a voyeur or something, lol...Keep up the exciting work. Much love to you and yours,
    Nicole


  • spamwitch
    December 16, 2005
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    Excellent visual and exciting write. Erotic yet tasteful!

  • Saint Chaos
    December 16, 2005
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    WOw I love this piece. it's been a while since i read an phone erotica but good none the less


  • joybug
    December 16, 2005
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    hot

    Hmmmm, been there done that--and must say---very convincing--great job hun---wanna another phone a friend? lol


  • Robbwindow
    December 16, 2005
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    Was it you takin the big fella or cisco ?
    Yesterday I just passed Cisco networking CCna1, feels great, not better than a good organism


  • nike gold member
    December 16, 2005
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    Very hot!!! Nice images, wish I could fall asleep that way. The only thing I would change would be to change the font or color of the other person dialogue to differentiate between the two. Other than that, tis perfect my man.

    Keep writing and keep answering the phone.


  • TheThinker
    December 16, 2005
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    Sexy

    Bloody hell... i thought i was there watching... wicked


  • The Vampire Jesse
    December 16, 2005
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    Great job. Here your fingers did do the talking. I love it seeing how i fancy this type of work.
    The Immortal,
    Jesse


  • leo2
    December 16, 2005
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    I guess in this case you let your fingers do the...hmm..errr..!@#king. I gotta get me one of them speaker phones..lol. Good job on this one.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • AALouisiana
    December 16, 2005
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    very provocative write...A+ on imagery

    I must concur with Danna.......you are one hot guy, Cisco...geez...


  • Danna Hobart
    December 16, 2005
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    This conversation just seems so familiar to me...

    You are hot, Cisco.


  • Chrissy Lee
    December 16, 2005
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    Wow! That is a real eye opener. If feels like you wrote scenes from a movie. It's like I was watching a porno! You did a horny job...lol!
    Get Er Done
    Chrissy Lee


  • tinuelena
    December 16, 2005
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    right to the point. i like it.

    elizabeth

  • BukGirl
    December 16, 2005
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    woooooheeeee! this poem holds no punches. a rapidfire back and forth conversation. jeez, man! sounds like you've had some practice at this kind of thing. good job, mr kid, you really capture the mood: hot and dirty and down to business.
    Edited on Dec 16, 1:00 because ''.


  • tanzanite
    December 16, 2005
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    I have just woken up - dayum!!! Now I am really awake - and boy, I love phone sex... this is hot...


  • NurseChilly gold member
    December 15, 2005
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    phewwwwww!!!!


    damned fine

  • Pain-is-Me
    December 15, 2005
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    damn, very good write! and i agree with RetardedPuppies, defintly not something you should read when your sexually fustrated and ready to explode!

  • Nicole Hanna
    December 15, 2005
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    Wow. Okay. lol. Not sure I was expecting anything this blatantly sexual, but I can't say I was disappointed by it at all Although, I must say I'll never understand the appeal of phone sex, as it just seems to be a waste of time that you could be spending having real sex. lol.


  • FallingAway
    December 15, 2005
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    wow. color me jealous. yeah, this poem is pretty great. definitely not your standard form. i really like it - i can tell where the words are coming from... and yes, i definitely think you should open up a phone sex hotline. you. would own.

  • Bumblebee Avarus
    December 15, 2005
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    Hey. I'm new but that was a nice poem, man. As a matter of fact, that was the first poem i read since i got here.
    Edited on Dec 15, 9:05 p.m. because 'misspelled word'.


  • letterstoladypeace
    December 15, 2005
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    *Gah* DEFINITELY not something I should be reading when I'm already sexually frustrated as all hell But seriously, great poem, I loved it

    Abby


  • NikoAmbiguous
    December 15, 2005
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    heh, cute write, i love it, seriously great. i love how it wasn't written in a distinct format of sorts, conversation or otherwise, but it made sense and it was cute. nice write, my kinda poem. good stuff. well, minus the whole penis thing, but other than that, good form.


  • Shakes-spear
    December 15, 2005
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    steamy

    What ever you do don't get rid of the period. There are way too many kids now! LOL I'm kidding I love kids...expecally making them! Now where are those batteries, this thing is dead...oh honey where is that ultra glide? The Shaker


  • -BleedingRose-
    December 15, 2005
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    Very hot, very sexy. Lovely job.

  • Soullesstyme21
    December 15, 2005
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    that was pretty damn good..i don't think i could have done better myself


  • Jaden silver member
    December 15, 2005
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    Thank god for REM . . . and a lot of 'other' things . . .


  • maryannde gold member
    December 15, 2005
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    Fucking Cisco...so where the hell were you last night when I needed that?

    Ya really need to start up a phone sex line... You would get rich!

    Loved the raunch..loved everything about this!


  • Reeds Heart
    December 15, 2005
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    Man this was exciting to me but i did get lost about who was talk weather it was the male or the female maybe next time you shouold space things out a bit and let use know who is speaking when


  • CountryCousin
    December 15, 2005
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    Very erotic.

    Well he must be some guy to have a dream like that and you know what I don't think that phone sex will quite do but I suppose it will work until you and he can be together.

  • Addressee Unknown
    December 15, 2005
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    You pen with such knowledge you must have some hefty phone bills. Can this be considered erotica or smut? (I'm not preaching by the way, more typing aloud a question I am posing myself) - Erotica to me at least is suggestive leaves one moist, whereas this, in the wrong hands would definitely leave splashes on the screen.

    Nice one.




  • December 15, 2005
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    I do not read much erotic poetry. I think you did a fine job with this one. It is very much so EROTIC! Excellent writing here.


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    December 15, 2005
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    nicely written. I think that is teh second best way of waking up. The first is in teh fleash. the fleash is always better. I like the passion that ran throughout your poem.. is was great..

  • Michael A
    December 15, 2005
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    Excellent writing, and certainly gets the blood flowing.


  • Passionate Desyre
    December 15, 2005
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    Whoa! Can I wake you up to?! Man that was hot as hell. Very very damn hawt writing. Great erotic poem. Keep up the great work Cisc

    Desyre


  • Symphony
    December 15, 2005
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    Whoa ... that was one heck of an erotic poem!! The only suggestions I'd have is to space out when the voice changes from the male to the female - I got a bit confused in one or two place

    Excellently written ... Wow!


  • grannyeri gold member
    December 15, 2005
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    Sounds like this is a ususal event, one done on many nights when these two aren't together. It works - why change it. Good descriptive write.


  • Sphere
    December 15, 2005
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    What can I say other than 'well written' and all that crap..

    but here s a thought.. they always wake you up, does the opposite ever happen...


  • FloridaFemme
    December 15, 2005
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    Whoa!
    My God, Cisco!

    Femme

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