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Hold my Hand

Chorus:
I've cried a dozen times
I've tried to understand.
I tried to hold my breath,
he never holds my hand.

I live to love a life
of bruises
stemmed from sand.

scat



verse:
I pass by several times
we always look away.
I tell myself some lies
and almost get away.

Author notes

its a work in progress... its kinda jazzy... i'm likin it. :-)
Written December 15th, 2005

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  • tinuviel
    December 22, 2005
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    woohoo jazzy! yay! i really like this one...

  • Stolenfaces
    December 20, 2005
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    yeah I'm so excited about this one... its got a wicked jazzy flow.
    Love,
    Hill

  • Fayth
    December 18, 2005
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    I like this one better than the one before...

    ♥Alicia♥

  • Stolenfaces
    December 16, 2005
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    not in the least

  • smitty1988
    December 15, 2005
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    very beautiful. is it finished?

  • imminentaccident
    December 15, 2005
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    hehe yeah Im likin it too...but then again I like everything you write. Love you! 7 days!

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