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Tissue Paper

It seems my heart
always leads
to a dead end.

And seems my feelings
are too complicated
to understand.



chorus:
and I tried to understand,
you tried to comprehend...
and I pretended.
faked to mend it,
but I bent it...
but I bent it.


I fell apart
each time you close your eyes
in my direction.

And I fell apart
because
I couldn't have your affection.

chorus:
and I tried to understand,
you tried to comprehend...
and I pretended.
faked to mend it,
but I bent it...
but I bent it.


bridge:
watered down
enough to scream your name.
I had to drown
enough to feel
your pain.


chorus:
and I tried to understand,
you tried to comprehend.
and I pretended.
faked to mend it,
but I bent it...
but I bent it...
yeah I bent it.

Author notes

I really like this... but the first part is a bit rusty.  It could use some work, but the chorus and bridge are SO strong.

Written December 15th, 2005

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Comments

  • Fayth
    December 18, 2005
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    Yeah I really like the chorus and bridge too. Can't wait to hear it sung. Good job, Hill.

    ♥Alicia♥

  • Methuselah
    December 15, 2005
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    perfect

    dange this is really good

  • imminentaccident
    December 15, 2005
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    sweet...hehe ANOTHER song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!I am so uber excited!7 days.