My heart wrapped with sins and disgrace
I wore my red dress and walked down the isle
grasping the fear and scartching the silent scream
I lay the perished flowers on the scars of my PAST
MY LOVE, the ashes of pain ,the sacrfice of faith
the pleasure of misery,the victim of shades
the breeze of illusions,the wish of immortality
My eyes shed crystalled tears,
my breathe chocked with the last kiss
I couldn't stop shivering
His tomb was held into the grave
MY LOVE, streams of blackened blood
trace of ancient thorns
candles of mortal hope
mirrors of tainted reflections
lies of bitter truth
the dream of pleasure lashed into anywhere but home
I bow to the mighty pain and vow to the broken HEART
with drained love..
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its been 7 months tht were hell to me and i couldnt write anythin..i hope u'd comment and u'd like it ..
Written December 15th, 2005
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Wow, it's really emotive yet beautifully written. Hope you are over it, because you have to move on still. Good luck!
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WOW....this poem is so sad and heart touching. i don't know how you feel because, i haven't lost my loved but it will come one day. and when i do i imagine that i will feel like you. this poem makes me want to cry. GOOD JOB!
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o thats so sad sou hows it been iv been gone for awhile
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thnks alot for the kind comment..i appreciate it..thnks for the support and glad dat u like it..
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You must have lost a loved one. I've never experienced it but i'm sure i will one day. This poem is so sad. Tears are in my eyes. Great write
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