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Untitled(RedRidingHood)

You’ve heard her Fairytale story
She’s just so cute and nice
But things can change in an instant
And you will pay the price
The wolf was not the predator
And Ridinghood not the prey
History got it all backwards
And told it the wrong way

Chorus:
Little Red Riding hood
So sweet and pure
But once she has you in her spell
There is no fucking cure
She’ll have your ass on a silver platter
I swear she’ll eat you whole
That girl is gonna take over
You know she wants your soul

In that little red hoody
She looks so damn tasty
But use your head, Mr. Wolf
Don’t be so hasty
I know your mind is stuck on her
But, baby, get your head straight
Because heartbreak is hell
And you’re opening the gate

(Chorus)

She looks so sweet and innocent
Skipping down the path
But push the wrong buttons
And you will feel her wrath
She’s got hell in her handbasket
And fury in her eyes
So don’t fuck with this girl
It’ll be to your demise

(Chorus)

Why won’t you listen?
Can you hear what I say?
Keep messing with this girl
And, baby, you’ll pay
You keep digging that hole
You’re sinking deeper and deeper
Why don’t you realize?
You could never keep her

(Chorus)

So you’ve heard the truth
Well, what do you think now?
Ridinghood’s the real reason
That at the moon, wolves howl
She savagely ripped his heart out
He didn’t know any better
Now he sits at home and cries
Wishing he’d never met her

(Chorus)

So when you see that little girl
The one you want to hold and touch
Ask yourself if it’s worth the pain
And if so, how much?
Once you go for this girl
Your heart will never mend
She’ll screw your life up over and over again
And you’ll be wishing it was the end

Author notes

This is a song I wrote to the beat of Austin's drums at band practice with my wonderful boyfriend Roy(my babe plays bass).
Written December 15th, 2005

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  • Twist of Faith
    December 15, 2005
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    Great analogy! Loved the flow, very well done!


  • NymphetomineGirl
    December 15, 2005
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    Singing

    Little Red Riding Hood...
    You sure are looking good...

    you're everything that a Big Bad Wolf could want.....

    OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

    Yeah I like that song.. but yours is a lot better...

    Can't want to see MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE

  • piccola silver member
    December 15, 2005
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    hmmm unique take on the little girl in the red hood ..hehe. Your poem is neat, I admire anyone that can play music. Especially if they read music...