To this naughty santa
I write on this blessed night
a naked man or chick-
and place a smile on this face
praying either could lick
To this naughty santa
not much wishing at all
for this might prove a note;
so can you grant my dream?
Oh! don't forget that boat
To this naughty santa
deliver me once more
a toy like no other...
eyes closed, time slips on by;
written down another
To this naughty santa
try this again if must
listen to gentle moans--
celebrate again now
Aww a sex toy that groans
Author notes
The Monchielle is a poem that consists of four five-line stanzas where the first line repeats in
each verse. Each line within the stazas consist of six syllables, and lines three and five rhyme.
The rhyme pattern is Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml.
The Monchielle form was created by Jim T. Henriksen
Written December 15th, 2005
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looks around what list??
i dont know what ur talking about lol
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Now that's how ALL Santas should look! And I love your Christmas list! LOL! Great Write!
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I am just learning the different types of poetry, havent made it that far just yet, but either way this was awsome, the pic was good, even if he was dressed, very cute santa indeed!
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What a wonderfully naughty holiday poem!
I love it!
As for the sexy santa...very um tastey looking, too bad it's not Angelina or Clooney
Edited on Dec 15, 8:59 p.m. because 'the damn typo gremlins were at it again'. -
if that was the case you and i wont be talking right now
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is that a partially nude Santa with the head of Justin Timberlake in his younger years? 
lmao
just loved this one 
now wouldn't just adore him if he was your neighbour from above
Leander -
Now this is an oh so nice thought for a Christmas gift. Where can I get one? Just deleiver him to my bed and no need to wrap him. Unwrapping would just waste too much precious time
Excellent Write!
Blessings
celticmoon -
RIGHT ON!!!
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Dear Santa.
Forget the gifts this year.. I want YOU in my stocking.....
And by Stocking I mean Bed.....
Oh... and maybe a condom or two... -
dont be shy now
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lol that was amazing lol iv naver seen the big red man so tiny amoing other things well id say more but im so not geting in to that lol well keep up the good wark ps sory about my spelling i cant help it
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hahaha, that's awesome...that makes me laugh hard core..Crow
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I think Santa really does look like that... or atleast he should. Then maybe that "I saw mommy kissing Santa Clause" song wouldnt be so gross. *giggles* Great poem, I found it interestingly new and delightfully refreshing. I needed something Holiday like to get me in the mood..... Christmas mood ofcourse.
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i found a nude santa but wouldve gotten into hot water with the mods about it; woohooo for mommy
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another awesome write
oh my... lol i think he is a pretty young santa.lol good write.. i am triny to remember a movie where this girl had a thing for guy in santa suits.. i think it was bad santa..lol i also noticed we have the same ap mom.(anglic mistress) another great poem .. thank you for sharing this with me .. -
This guy was HOTT! ha ha ha thank you for showing me this sexy man!
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hehehehe nothing wrong at that
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The kind of Santa I could like.
Well no matter who invented it that Santa has to be the kind of Santa that I wished was around before I got married. Still not bad to look at even though I am married. Haha a good one.
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