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Tonight is the night

Rain is falling and lightening is striking outside the window
The electricity went down
Candle lights shine through your big blue eye
Wine glasses reflect the shine in the firewall
Music on
Dancing like no one in this world
Our romantic night
Tonight is the night
Tonight is the last nigh
After tonight you will no longer be mine
After tonight you will be her husband
After tonight we will become stranger
No. I don't want this night to end
I hold on to you
Hold you tight, tears coming down
You bend down and try to kiss my tears away
But i stop you
I don't want you to see my tears
I want you to remember me as a happy woman
I want you to remember me as a carefree woman
After tonight ends you will no longer be mine
Your kisses, your shoulder, your everything will no longer be mine
Tomorrows you will have her in you shoulder
Tomorrow you will kiss her and say "I do"
O~ How I wish I met you sooner
How I wish I was her
But if love was perfect, it wouldn't be love would it?

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Written December 15th, 2005

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  • crystallove
    January 9, 2006
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    Beautiful poem. thanks for entering.


  • MorningWinds
    December 21, 2005
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    Wow...I am speechless! You did a wonderful job with this.So many people can relate to this and like sweetheart06 said,the words you use to describe is beautiful.


  • December 17, 2005
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    Great write Dreamer I like this poem full of regrets and at the sametime the words you decrible it is so beauitful