Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Christmas Wish~acrostic

Alas, the angel bent her feather golden wing
Before the winter flurries among kissing the dove
Christen upon the evergreen awaken the sun king
Disembark her wish among the caged abreast of

Erupted the laughter on the snowman’s rosy cheek
Faced the eye of the storm washed over
Greenery standing frozen of winter’s complexities meek
Harnessed her powder blown in by holy clover

Inflamed the prickled green among the winter storm
Joyous rebirth given from the angel above impelled
Kindling hearths in fireplace roasting the candle norm
Light glowing from miles seen against wind compelled

Motion shaken not stirring sent come to mind
Nonetheless glowing the smile seen on the face
Opulent wonder swept in from the northern wind
Promise from the star’s precious falling cycle embraced

Quelled the hunger fed the beggars dancing tonight’s
Rapture music as the wind snow carved smiling
Shone the young hearts awaken this snow flight
Tepid the melting kiss swept the snow sheet piling

Under the moon light dancing among the flurries
Vivid shape transformed a wish upon the child
Warm snuggled in the comfort bed lost worries
Xmas eve night wishing for stories told smiled

Young on the innocence tale of St. Nick’s quest
Zephyr these immense stories told each year blessed

Author notes


Written December 15th, 2005

A contest entry

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 10 of 10
  • Judith Chandler
    December 22, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Not only a Christmas acrostic but an alphabet acrostic with some interesting images.

    Thank you for submitting this unusual write to my contest.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 18, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Hi, thank you for this entry,nice A-Z Acrostic here
    words are sensable and made sense, good luck in our contest..MM

    • saddie23
      December 18, 2007
      Edit | Reply

      thank u

      Thank u for the nice sentiments given to my poem. Saddie23

  • saddie23
    December 23, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Thank you for liking my poem. This is was challenging because I'm not very good acrostic, but keeps me steady learning and growing as a poet. Saddie23

  • saddie23
    December 23, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Thank you for your applause and gracious praise on my poem. This means a lot from a wonderful poet. Saddie23


  • Malabu
    December 21, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    woe love the way you mixed images into this poem....your word use not to be ignored either.....this is very lovely to read and the thoughts keep me ponderous.....its a wonderful acrostic and I can see your talent within this writing.....very beautifully expressed.....
    Huggs
    Malabu


  • Samplette gold member
    December 21, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    You've done a beautiful job here. Very well written. Thank you so much for entering it into the contest.
    Sam


  • Vickie J
    December 16, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    You are welcome!!! This deserves many nice compliments! You can tell you put a lot of effort into it. f; vj

  • saddie23
    December 16, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Thank you for the niciest comment given on my poem. Saddie23


  • Vickie J
    December 15, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    You did a superb job on this wonderful acrostic! Best wishes in the contest!~vj

1 - 10 of 10