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Lingering In Your Senses

Use those strong
Masculine hands
To beautifully
Execute your plan
Let me breathe you in
As I sense your presence
Your irresistible essence
Take my hands and wrists
Opportunities not to be missed
Pull them up together tight
Blindfold me
I will do anything
For you tonight
Watch me squirming
On the bed
Can you feel me
Lingering in your head?
Resting there so softly
Allowing you total power
& Control over me.

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Written December 15th, 2005

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  • mindi38
    May 7, 2006
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    a very deap loving poem , fantasticaly written well done loved it , mindi


  • December 21, 2005
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    a delicacy

    nice relationship between surrender and play loved it very much

  • MereOblivion
    December 16, 2005
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    OMG...I love this! The flow of it is amazing...you can't stop reading it, can't wait to see what's next. Very nice...I'm gonna read more!


  • December 16, 2005
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    MMMMMMMMMM this is lovely erotic enough not to be smutty, very tastefully done well done


  • whispersoftly
    December 15, 2005
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    lmao the one you posted before was norty!!! lol you could have left it like it was but i would have got in bother!!! lmao norty boy DEAR!! xx Cheryl

  • flyingspur
    December 15, 2005
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    very sexy..loved it

    i found this so erotic an stimulating...very well written an put together cheryl.....dear..x
    Edited on Dec 15, 10:09 because 'she told me too...boooo'.

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