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Heard Voices

I heard voices from an angelic vocal
Her voice serene, beautiful as a dream
She held sway my desires and my fears
I fell to her voice, on my knees
And the voice of angelic haste flows
I heard voices from the barrier

I heard voices from a seraphic lyric
Her words flown in fallen misery
Her hair doused in passion and everything
She formed a void, for her charisma is to die for
And her finger lays a lust of lyrical note
I heard words from the seraph

I heard voices from a talent ignite
And I never fell to audacious dreams
Her wings gilded me with notes of vision
Vistas of seen flames
I can percieve a love, enthralled
I heard charisma from the lady

I hear voices of sweet music, to my ears
Nothing but the wind in my hair
Nothing but the angel in my head
She is my phantasmagoria, my obsession
And I notice her fragile heart, which I will never break
But I heard voices from that beautiful creature

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Written December 14th, 2005

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  • GothicTulip
    December 15, 2005
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    A tragical kiss upon the cheek of all fair ma

    If this lady exists and she can read this then maybe she will wish to become one with your essence. It's hard to give a critical comment on something from which the tragical feeling drips like thich drops of blood from a darkened rose. It sounds desperate and yet again in the very heart of this hopelessness there's optimism, a plunge into a world where everything is believable...and likely to happen.


  • Shawna Haag
    December 14, 2005
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    This is a very touching poem, the words flow very well, it would make great lyrics for a song. Very well written, it is beautiful.
    Edited on Dec 14, 8:46 p.m. because 'spelling'.


  • sleepingINblackRain
    December 14, 2005
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    Awesome like whoa

    This poem is amazing, the detail and emotion is unmatchable.

    Breathtaking

    ~X~Taylor