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Her Everything

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Do you see her crying, pouring her heartache out?
Once she was an innocent, but now she’s filled with doubt.
Her heart is broken once again, her mind no longer trusts,
her body bleeds her hurt away, her soul has turned to dust.

She thinks she’ll never be loved again, but I already do,
I’ve loved her since I met her, but she doesn’t have a clue.
I’m not asking for a miracle, I just want her to see
that I could be her everything… but she won’t notice me.

There’s so much I want to say to her when I look into her eyes,
but I know that she’ll reject me, and shatter all my pride.
I want to hold her when she’s crying, and kiss away her pain,
be the angel who protects her, and the rock that keeps her sane.

She thinks she’ll never be loved again, but I already do,
I’ve loved her since I met her, but she doesn’t have a clue.
I’m not asking for a miracle, I just want her to see
that I could be her everything… but she won’t notice me.

No one sees the tears she cries at night…
no one sees the pain that she keeps locked inside…

She thinks she’ll never be loved again, but I already do,
I’ve loved her since I met her, but she doesn’t have a clue.
I’m not asking for a miracle, I just want her to see
that I could be her everything… but she won’t notice me.

I could be her everything…

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  • almostlover3
    June 3
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    that was a really good poem. i loved it...i can relate to this one too.


  • SensualWhispers
    February 9, 2007

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    wow.....

    I love the following lines
    She thinks she’ll never be loved again, but I already do,
    I’ve loved her since I met her, but she doesn’t have a clue.
    I’m not asking for a miracle, I just want her to see
    That I could be her everything… but she won’t notice me.

    There’s so much I want to say to her when I look into her eyes,
    But I know that she’ll reject me, and shatter all my pride.
    I want to hold her when she’s crying, and kiss away her pain,
    Be the angel who protects her, and the rock that keeps her sane.

    This is really amazing. The words flowed beautifully and the hurt and love mixed together is just amazing. You've done an awesome job. Thanks for entering the contest and the best of luck to you.

  • The Obsessioner
    April 26, 2006
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    i love this. theres such a good flow and the rhyming scheme isn't forced at all.
    thanx for entering and good luck


  • Bweeveed
    March 3, 2006
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    !!!!

    ^^thats all that i could use to describe this. its beautiful.

  • wolfie 007
    February 21, 2006
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    Excellent

    Two very touching poems, "Private Hell" and "Her Everything." Nothing is more tragic than unrequited love. I do consider most cases of abuse to be type of unrequited love, because often the victim adores their aggressor too take dramatic action. Your poems capture the internal agony very well, and I applaud you for that.

    Really, I was never very good at poetry...In fact, I usually loathe reading and writing poems with rare exceptions. Any poem I start ends with sick, dark humor and sarcasm, and I so I rarely share the few I have put together.

    I appreciate the review for "...Candle...", btw. I'm always so paranoid when I share it, because I always worry that I slathered the melodrama on too thickly.

    That's all for now. Fare well ^_^

    -The Heretic
    poets/kaoruwolf

  • LovyDovy
    January 28, 2006
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    This is nicely written. Great job.
    Good luck on the contest; thanks for entering.
    -Céline


  • Ur Supergurl silver member
    January 5, 2006
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    well done

    well written. im a song writer myself..and i play guitar and piano. this is beautifully written and once you get those chords worked out..i would love to know what they are so i could put these lyrics to a tune. take care. -Sable-

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