The wind is whirling
The leaves are twirling
spinning me 'round and around.
My world is shaking
My head is aching
Feeling heavy, I'm falling down.
Falling faster...never ending
Faster, Faster NEVER ENDING
because there is no ground.
My head is swimming
My thoughts are dimming
as I forever tumble down.
Author notes
Love is confusing isn't it...
we can fear it but we still want and need it. Smiling....I love the feeling of falling in love, never knowing which way is up.
Written December 14th, 2005
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Reading it without the comments, it seems more like a poem about depression. Re-reading it after having read the comments, it seems more indicative of a dark, needy, dependant kind of love. Good images and an interesting read.
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Great Job!
This is really well written, great imagination. It's short but has alot of dark emotions. Great Job! -
pretty good
This is a pretty good poem. Its a bit confusing, but rather interesting -
Makes you wonder doesn't it. I don't think I want to fall this way. Good job .
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I loved this, it is so gooooooooood, I was so happy to you had posted, hope all is well and you have a fantasic Christmas,
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great
Weird....but totally cool. Another favorite of mine. It's so simple but you give it a life that makes it so much more interesting then that.3 thumbs way up.
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