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Lost

I don't recognize me, I recognize my eyes.
Curtains being pulled back to reveal intriguing pasts, sick and vicious
hideously and evilly wrong.
My life has collapsed and i had hardly noticed, How much does anybody ever notice?
Love.
Another dark and ugly word- a long silence lost in the radio
Forget finding answers, abandon life instead.
our hearts were beating in double thumps and lung filling in a rhythm at the same time.

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Written December 14th, 2005

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  • Dygurl
    December 14, 2005
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    wow powerful piece, i love it, its, confusion and feeling and emotion, everything a poem should be. awsome write. stay strong.