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Dream Lover

We are so far
apart, yet I feel you
close at heart. I curl in bed
alone each night and dream of you.
Visions of you in my mind and love so true.
I slip on your shirt and inhale the sweet scent of
of your essence just to be brought closer to you. Every
morning I awake, my lips still radiating from the scorching sting
of your kiss. I do not dare move from my bed as my legs are still
shuddering from your orgasmic touch. My nipples, hard, sore and
aching for your lips to engulf them once again. Tangled up within
the sheets I lay still basking in the aftermath of your intoxicating
love. The moistness still flows in regions nether as I relive the
passion you released into and unto me. Sighing softly, wishing
you were here with me. I long for you to fill my empty arms.
Allow me to hold you, for my breasts to be your pillow as
you lay with me each night. My heart racing with images
of us together sharing, even one brief moment of love,
passion and desire. My soul calls your name every
waking minute of every day. And in the night,
when you are not here it weeps.The things
you do to me are unexplainable and truly
undeniable. I long to feast upon your
body and drink from your soul. You
weaved a web and ensnared my
heart. You ravished my soul
like none before you. You
have my head spinning,
my heart aching and
my soul yearning. I
am so lost without
you. I want you,
I need you.......
I LOVE
YOU!



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Written December 14th, 2005

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  • sheltered
    March 18, 2007
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    Very nice and I have dabbled a little and know how tough this can be.


  • Celticmoon
    October 1, 2006
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    Jamie, thank you so much for your lovely and kind words on this piece. I am so glad you enjoyed it. It's actually what I consider one of my best piece and one of my favorites

  • verses on flesh
    October 1, 2006
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    This is a very sexy write, Bel. Though it holds a lot of saddness and desperation for something just beyond your grasp. I liked this poem because I could feel it. It feed the reader more than the ideas, but gave them the emotions and the need so that they too were experiencing it as you were. Wonderful job, not many can accomplish that. Thank you so much for sharing such a beautiful work with me.

    jamie


  • Miss Kill
    May 25, 2006
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    this is really intense, i can almost feel it. i really dont have words for it, but the sexual roll to it is not distasteful its inspiring, and i really, really love it.

  • brokenheartedsecret
    April 18, 2006
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    Thank you for entering this poem as well! I really love how you present your poems in such unique structures... prehaps I shall have to steal your idea at some point.. hehe! Good Job, and Good Luck!


  • Celticmoon
    January 15, 2006
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    Aww hun, thanks for your so very sweet and kind words.
    I'm so glad you liked this piece


  • Kain
    January 15, 2006
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    Amazing.. truly amazing.. Your work leaves me in awe, I am eternally thankful that you decided to enter my contest. You captured my heart with the words 'regions nether'.. don't ask me why! Your words were exquisite in their form and choice. Thank you for commenting on the three wonderful poets, I hope you enjoyed their pieces.

    Yours,
    Kain

  • Celticmoon
    January 10, 2006
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    All I can say about this piece is that this is how I see and feel him. It is my feelings towards him and my heart's desire


  • January 10, 2006
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    Artistic

    Wow! Another sensous write from you again. Oh my, I tried not to think and absorb it on my head all the words that I read it for it is really tantalizing, arousing and erotic. Well written my dear, beautiful words and very well expressed.


  • Celticmoon
    January 3, 2006
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    Thank you my sweet sister.
    Glad you enjoyed this piece.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 3, 2006
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    Amazing sensual write, my sister girl! Wow! Your description of passion and its' aftermath is just breathtaking! Very sensual and erotic; loved it!


  • Daoine
    December 27, 2005
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    Wow..now that is passion at it's purest, sis. It takes my breath away and makes me even yearn for that smallest crumb of lust, love, passion. Amazing...perfect, sis. Love it totally.
    Daoine

  • Celticmoon
    December 27, 2005
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    So I've noticed as I watch my list of latest veiws.....lol

    You have managed to read nearly 15 pieces in under 30 minutes.
    I'm glad you are enjoying them.

  • deepest feelings
    December 27, 2005
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    what a great job brings shivers inside me such a b'ful way of expressing loved it i just cant stop reading your collections
    LOVE UR WORK


  • Soul-2-Soul
    December 21, 2005
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    i must be in such a wonderful daze after reading your material because i thought i had commented on this as well...on to the poem...number one, i love the picture...ethereal and i love the astral feel to it...another wonderful shape to the poem and the feeling and emotion in it are simply wonderful. my own heart seems to be a lil happier tonite after reading this and its always great when a poem can strike you that way...compliments to the author.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 18, 2005
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    Lovely!

    awe, what a read, I love this poetic kiss, with the flow of words and form so beautiful! Thanks for sharing, all the best in this contest!

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver

  • Celticmoon
    December 17, 2005
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    I thank you emensely my dear. I am so pleased you liked this piece. And know I am honored to call you my sister.


  • metrophobiac
    December 17, 2005
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    THIS this write, oh celticmoon, how have I missed out on you!!! I am so privileged now to be able to call you a sister, and to read your offerings stemming from the heart so pure....This my friend, deserves an applause, and I give a whole hearted one...and the picture...even my friend Amy here had to stop...she was arrested by it as she looked over my shoulder.... Bekah


  • darell
    December 17, 2005
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    Excellent!

    OMG!!! This is so beautiful! I'm in awe of the majesty and
    wonderous affection of love that's wrapped into this delicate
    piece of romantic rapture! Girl i'm so happy for you!
    It's quite evident from this stunning masterpiece that you're
    in love. I mean the real thing! My prayers and blessings are
    with you and yours. May both of your dreams and deepest
    yearnings be realized! Love and peace!
    Edited on Dec 17, 3:09 p.m. because ''.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 17, 2005
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    r

    Yes the voice of the deep yearning and very deep love by the soul of the heartfelt poet.The thoughts are very deeply sailing in the boat of the love which is in the river of time where the sailor is still awaited and the waves are danciang with the sailorless boat in the storms of the sentiments of love through and through. The story of the heart is told and retold here in this write very truely so nicely too. I must say it is a beautiuful work of the poetic presentation which is completely dipped in the river of the love and still it is survived by the hope of love.The flow of the write is very impressive and just to the point too. I really appreciate this work.prabhudayal khattar


  • Wolf of Night
    December 14, 2005
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    Mandreams like that have to rape your mind during the day whew turn down the heat please! The best of luck to you I believe you have a winner here and I enjoyed it!


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    December 14, 2005
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    This was very sweet and has some hot spots that give it lots of passion great work with this I love how you have it set up and the pic adds to it very well it pulls things all together lots of love Robin...aka SH


  • Celticmoon
    December 14, 2005
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    I have always adored your kind words sis.
    Thank you much glad you liked it


  • Celticmoon
    December 14, 2005
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    Thank you for your kind words dear lady.
    I am so pleased you liked this piece.


  • Sunkissedrose
    December 14, 2005
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    I love how it starts out, and then ends almost in a point..or a peak so to speak. The end result of such passion. Love the flow, and rhythm.
    ~Carrie

  • passionsdaughter
    December 14, 2005
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    Beautiful

    It has been a long time since I have read anything so erotic intertwined with the delicate lace of romance. So tender, passionate that it radiates through the mind of the reader. This is sheer perfection!

    hugs,
    Nicole

  • Celticmoon
    December 14, 2005
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    Please feel free to help yourself to this picture and any there after you may find that speak to you. And allow me to thank you for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed this piece.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 14, 2005
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    passionate~

    You might know my hubby would be at work while I am reading this one.....Penned so sensual and erotic....... I love the shape of the heart too.......whoooohooooo you go sis...I need to go turn my furnace down now....
    Beautifully penned
    Love n hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    December 14, 2005
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    wow, my mouth is hanging open and I am stunned...partly for reasons I'll keep to myself partly because this is one hell of an erotic piece of poetry. Excellently written, with more images than explanation, which is how I like it. Love the picture of the dream walker up there. May I borrow it? Please Please Please! Awesome write. I'm very impressed.

    ~Lyrical

  • rainbow tears
    December 14, 2005
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    this was just so amazing i mean wow!!! this was wonderful good job


  • joybug
    December 14, 2005
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    WowWowheck yeah

    Celtic, this is absolutely amazing hun. I felt your longing desire and passion as I read and then re-read every line. Wow! It gives me the need for a smoke. Maybe tonight Mr. Jim will reap the rewards of imagination you awoke with such wonderful erotic words. Thank you for such a wonderful write!

  • Celticmoon
    December 14, 2005
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    Oh Mally, you are so sweet..
    I love ya hun
    You always say the kindess things.

    Thank you for your very endearing words
    So glad you liked this


  • Malabu
    December 14, 2005
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    ohhhhhhhhh Celtie.......this is sweet and tenderly touching....erotic yet subtle in its call for more.....a moment in time suspended......lingering love....wanted to never expire......pleasing yet daunting.....such an explicit show of emotion.......you my dear have penned a lovely image filling my air.......absolutely marvelous......I applaude your call for the essence of love......
    HUgs
    Mal


  • Rakerman1
    December 14, 2005
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    How sensual and erotic can ya get? This is an excellent bit of writing my friend. Love, lust and wanting flow from each and every line.
    Very well done
    Roses
    Rakerman

  • Celticmoon
    December 14, 2005
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    You my dear have such an amazing way with words. One cannot help but to enjoy your comments as much as your work

    Thank you as always


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    December 14, 2005
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    Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

    I love the picture
    and heart for sure
    the rest is pure
    lust and its allure.

    Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

  • Celticmoon
    December 14, 2005
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    I'm so glad you liked this piece...
    Also glad it shivered ya timbers. I do hope your boyfriend appreciates it all but most of all you!

    Thank you for your sweet words


  • Iohagh
    December 14, 2005
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    Oh celticmoon, the second time in two days someone shivered my timbers. You guys got to stop doing that. Its, well anyway, now I have to see my boyfriend. Thank you very much. Applause is what you do when words are just impossible to think about...


  • Celticmoon
    December 14, 2005
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    Thank you hun...
    You know I always value your imput and very kind words.



    Edited on Dec 14, 9:20 because ''.


  • wbiro gold member
    December 14, 2005
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    OH WOW BEL! This is such a cool poem and what a top-notch picture selection! You weave the longing of physical world love into that of the love of the heart and mind that exists between poets here on AP... quite vivid, and feelings shared by many...

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