I'm the poison in your blood
I'm the voices in your head
I'm the hope that wishes you were dead
I'm your demon
I'm the darkness in your heart
Every fear you have deep inside
Every night that you've cried
I'm the cause
That you can't fight
I'm every reason you
have to Die
I'm the thing inside of you
I'm your Soul
And you can't ran and hide
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I really like this
I dont know Why just do ?
~Anastasia~
Written December 13th, 2005
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hey asia. i loved this poem. my poetry is getting worse and worse i can see it. i used to have dark poetry all twisted and demented and flowing but now it all sucks cuz i havent writen poetry in a while. but i love this poem. i like the background too lol. but yea i hope ur doing okay. and i am fine now. i was having problems but ya just hav'ta learn to bury then deep inside and sprout a smile to your face and live on. yup yup. well luv ya asia great poem buh byez ~Jamie~
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It's good. And definitely interesting. It's from a different point of view than most poems, but I like that. It fits the poem. Good job, keep writing.
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i like this, it's dark which is exactly what i like...great poem, im gonna add u to my favorites cuz i wanna read the rest of ur poems
byz for now!
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Is this the poem you were writing in school that one day? I saw the first line and was antisapting on reading it, and now that I have I know exactly why I've wanted to. This is really good. I love it.
xox
Allie -
i really liked it
i really like this to stasier its awesome i really lied it i always have its aweasome luv you lots ~lissa~ this is an awesome backround
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