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war



What do I think of that ?
wrap up my Bones In packed mud ?

Raven My dear !!

for I am Lucian Of the dark seer's
chanting tunes in the midnight hour
awake right before dawn in my Unholy tower
drifting thoughts of the dark kind
I will curse your body in between the sands of time

as I walk towards you in the fog of night
scorching your body with flames
you scream as I laugh with delight

As you see am not a mere man
I am a Immortal prince of darkness
scorched with the tongue
of diablo himself
I laugh at death and destruction too

"I gaze in your eyes"

you will not hypnotize me fool

you call yourself Medusa of the arts
I challenge you too war

"as I draw my sword"

"chanting in tune"

I call the moon
in its crimson hue
in this dark hour tonight
I will raise the dead for
my warish delight
bring me now
a army of twelve
six daemons of fire
and six of hellish delight

"I Begin too laugh"
as I stare in your direction

Author notes

for those of you that do not know I am a role player and this is a reply to a challange that was made twords me by a enemy named Raven
Written December 13th, 2005

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  • World Of Anxiety
    January 6, 2006
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    haha! Roleplaying! That's awesome!!!
    Nicely written Lucian! Very descriptive and written clearly.
    Keep writting! Hope to see more!
    -Becka


  • Bungalow Bill
    January 4, 2006
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    Magnificent, and as a fellow Scorpio I salute you!

  • TheLostVampire
    December 14, 2005
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    darkly beautiful

    very nice. you describe things so well. but i am glad that you explained cuz i was also alittle lost....anywayz i think this is very nice. and i agree that this does sound alittle like a song. ^_^


  • Calvin Therapy
    December 14, 2005
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    damn bro, this was like a song in away i could see it like that, i don't know why, but you could be the rapping or singing prince of darkness as well here.
    lol


  • ----michael----
    December 13, 2005
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    i am glad you explained, i was getting scared! lol, loved it, the description was fantastic, its been a while since i played a rpg but wow i could imagine the warrior then. awesome!

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