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Dolly Dearest

Dolly dearest,
why are you so creepy?
why do you stare at me with those blank eyes and evil grin.
How you sit up there at night making strange noises.
Your out to get me arent you?
Please stay away from Jenny...
Why did you kill Jenny? That's a lie i didnt like her more.
Okay i will be quite and go to sleep. Please Dolly Dearest, NO more...

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Written December 13th, 2005

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  • Babyruth714
    December 27, 2005
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    whoa..that's so creepy and good Jess (sorry for being late on commenting) reminds me of this doll I had as a child it had a really scary face, but that's really vivid imagery and has a morbid innocence Ruth


  • Misomaniac
    December 25, 2005
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    I didn't see any picture! oh I see I'm not good enough this poem reminds me of the stories you tell me about you and that
    Chucky Doll don't worry I'll have it all melted down. Is that the doll heather gave you that one year?


  • SapphireStars
    December 14, 2005
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    well, since the gold membership is gone, I don't get to see the scary picture Oh well, there's alway imagination ^0^ The picture that I imagine of the doll looks just pale white, and with facial expressions of the older generation dolls. In a way, this reminds me of "Chuckie." >.> Anywho, nice poem Jess Keep on writing!
    ~Ibar~

  • Spork the Mighty
    December 14, 2005
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    I don't see a pic and I don't get it...and who's Jenny?! Ahhhhh!


  • Robert Rumery
    December 13, 2005
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    AWSOME!!!!

    That Ruled... I loved the pic also!!

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