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Some moons and bones

Poem 1: Witch craft by vic

Your garden,
Madame Sosostris,
Its herbs and flowers
Its abundant fruit
And plump asparagus,
Courgettes
and fragrant, sweet
sweet peas?

The secret, child,
Is in the planting
The sacred act at midnight
Of burying the seeds
To bring forth life
From the blood of fish and bone meal
Planted with enchantement
In the light of the waxing moon

Poem 2: Pack by Heli

Fido bone,
Dog prowl.
Bona fide,
Moon Howl

Author notes

For Mary Cat and The Actress
Written December 13th, 2005

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  • Cat gold member
    January 14, 2006
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    this poem would have won gold- it is so stunning in its language- perfect in presentation- and poetically - oh my...

    just beautiful.

    m

  • Philogos gold member
    December 31, 2005
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    I shouldn't claim undue credit here. Google knows all, tells all.
    Edited on Dec 31, 12:17 because ''.


  • December 28, 2005
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    I agree with Harlequin you certainly know a lot of stuff.Ive got a long way to go to begin to catch up

  • Harlequin
    December 15, 2005
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    You are a very well read person Vic, and I bow to your superior
    knowledge. The Poem is excellent as are all your writes.

  • Philogos gold member
    December 14, 2005
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    A mock Egyptian name (suggested to Eliot by "Sesostris, the Sorceress of Ecbatana," the name assumed by a character in Aldous Huxley's novel Crome Yellow who dresses up as a gypsy to tell fortunes at a fair). (NA)


  • chills gold member
    December 14, 2005
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    Gorgeous - Who's Mme Sosostris? It's pagan and voluptuous stuff...


  • clippedofwing
    December 13, 2005
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    Poem 1 - wow

    Did you really write this? Sounds a bit like me to me!! Only jokin..
    Edited on Dec 14, 4:46 because 'incriminating references!'.

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