no one

She walks into the room

so many people

still no one takes notice

she tries speaking to them

they don't hear her

gracious hellos

proper goodbyes

she starts to get discouraged

then she just tries again

and again

then finally she gives up

no one understands her

no one wants her

no one reaches out to her

no one to love her

never will

never has

Author notes

this is just how im feeling right now...i feel so alone... but i guess that would be my fault...thanks for reading this...
Written December 13th, 2005

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christy22
March 29, 2006
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thanks....
AMEgirly
March 29, 2006
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wow this is rele sad. but dont worry u r not alone! many ppl feel lonley and like no1 cares but u just gotta remember there is always sum1 out there who cares about u and loves u! awesome poem and keep it up! much <3 ame
christy22
February 24, 2006
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you are always there for me...but im still allowed to feel alone...ummm...i was realy upset this day...
Benji
February 24, 2006
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what about me?
Patroklos
December 25, 2005
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Interesting structure.. Disjointed, much like the feelings expressed, ne? We all have bad days.. but if you fail and you fall, it means you had the courage to climb up high.. So, climb back up and see if next time you can fly..^_^
Good luck, babe. You'll be in my thoughts.

~Michelle Clark~
HaleyMary
December 13, 2005
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Yeah, it kind of sucks sometimes when people don't return hellos or a smile. Maybe they just have a lot on their minds, so I don't try to take anything too personally.