These feelings i have cannot be removed,
Until my penis is softly smoothed,
With your gentle touch up and down,
Right to the bottom and up to the crown.
Suck on my stick and you'll make it go hard,
Talk to your mates and give them my card,
Tell them to call any hour of the night,
And thell them all that i 'DON'T' bite!
Space Hopper's good, but Doggy is better,
i'll lick you for hours making you get so much wetter.
My fingers gliding up your soft moist walls,
As you gently caress and suck my balls.
I'll come so hard, it'll break down the wall,
While you scream and shout: my name you call;
'Andy! Oh Andy! I'm going to come!
Now take your huge penis out of my bum!'
Author notes
Written December 13th, 2005
A contest entry
- Edna's EROTIC STORY & POETRY Contest by Edna Sweetlove.
400 points, ended March 31, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I got lost with the space hopper reference. Congratulations on the size of your organ, Andy. Buttock-probing is preferable with a smaller one I have always felt.
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This is great! Silly and light-hearted yet very sensual and hot. I, myself got a little hot and bothered just reading it! These opening lines are my absolute favorite. I just love them!
These feelings i have cannot be removed,
Until my penis is softly smoothed,
Totally sets the tone off right! Keep up the good work!
~Blessings~
StormyEyes -
-falls off his bed laughing-
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This is awesome .. I'll admit, it doesn't really fit in this contest, but it's still, as "Muse" noticed, absolutely hilarious!! Thanks for entering the contest, even if it doesn't fit .. otherwise I might not have had a chance to read this!
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Tint this is wicked! absolutely hilarious! more like this please! You manage to capture the raw variety of sex yet in a crude (but funny) way. Brilliant! xXx
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