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My Mother

 

My Mother


 

A wise protector,
advisor, my mother.


 

I know in all my years of life a lesson
will be taught and guidance will be given.


 

My mother, a woman of wisdom, I am
honored to have her in my time of need.


 

A support I know I can count on through
trials and gifts she gives me through life.


 

Cradling me as a child through infancy
to an adult I soon will become.


 

No love is stronger and more
alive than a mothers love.


 

Whether she is with me in spirit or beside me,
I will remember these times of strength.


 

For her creation of sculpturing me
into a strong and wise individual.


 

An image of what she had
become, for me to carry on.

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Written December 12th, 2005

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  • tarcus
    April 7

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    Cradling me as a child through infancy
    to an adult I soon will become.


    May be a bit late but should it not have been
    to the adult I will soon become


  • cgirl0410 silver member
    December 16, 2005
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    Really good piece. Great write. Congratulations on winning silver! This is a really touching piece. - cgirl0410

  • JacksWord
    December 13, 2005
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    Excellent

    "sculpturing me into a strong and wise individual"... That line said it all! My mom did the same, for my dad died and she had to raise all 5 of us. She was wise and strong! All moms are! A very nice ode to moms, Brenda! ~John


  • mypassion
    December 13, 2005
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    Thanks Rae for the critique, I fixed my typos and thanks for liking the pics. Happy Holidays Brenda


  • B Chandler
    December 13, 2005
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    okay to jump straight into this write:
    first off, you misspelled a word...its spelled Cradling
    and secondly, try this as a suggestion:
    For her creation of sculpturing me
    into a strong and wise individual.
    (you really didn't need the comma)

    Pictures were fantastic
    Rae

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