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Poinsettas

Poinsettas bloom like poison
Death disguised by beauty
Jagged edges meet
Unfurl their flat spokes
Breathing through preaching
Grow with a Bible
Down their throats
The tweed suits and
Matching ties that
Encourage their horridness
For they, they are lovely
With a bite
But is their home
A poison beautiful
Once injected?

Author notes

A parallel between some poinsettas decorating our church and the religion itself.

I wrote this while musing during the sermon.

(I'll probably go to hell.)
Written December 12th, 2005

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  • chintzy faberge
    December 14, 2005
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    Suure. *warmfuzzies*


  • Atalanta
    December 13, 2005
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    Bossa Nova!

    Wow, I like this immensely well! Unmitigated kudos to you! Can I place this in my favorite poems by other people file?

  • dream catcher
    December 12, 2005
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    Hmm... i take this to me you are partly the pointsetta and that you don't feel partiuclarly comfortable about having grown up with the bible "down your throat"... if not i totally read it wrong.
    Spanking background yo


  • chintzy faberge
    December 12, 2005
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    see author comments

  • spinachisgreen
    December 12, 2005
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    It sounds good..
    but I'm thinking that Im missing the overall meaning
    Edited on Dec 12, 6:59 p.m. because 'bad grammar'.

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